Revision #2

When showing my midterm submission to the class, it was pointed out to me that the original conversation between the two actors, Lucie and Avery, was somewhat hard to hear. When working on trying to raise the audio levels, I realized the conversation between the two was awkward and a little bit forced, and it did not quite fit the theme of the film. I rewrote the dialogue for this section of the film in order to convey Avery as very loving towards her girlfriend while Lucie is somewhat disinterested and even a little distracted. I then had the actors come back to the scene of the original shoot and recording the newly scripted scene, making sure to have them project so that it would be easier to hear in the final cut.